|Reviews for Broken Promise|
| Lhune 9/16/05 . chapter 1
Hm that is sad... it really is!But still is good... very good.
| Lily 9/12/05 . chapter 1
'You never wanted to...'Wow... That one sentence makes your entire poem really worthwile. We know people lies and don't try hard enough to keep their promises. But 'you never wanted to'... that puts on a whole new feeling to the poem. It's not simple betrayal we're talking about, it's about a purposfully hurtful action.'A lieYou'll never return'.I will surely return to review your future work ;).Lily