Beautiful. I have no other words for this than that

Oh how sweet. I love this peom because most of the poems i read are sad and mostly things never turn out right. But reading this peom makes you want ot think it could. Great job.

aww, such an incredibly sweet poem!! great job once agian!!

A passionate poem, yet serene in a way, too. It had a nice lilting rythem to it, and I always enjoy that kind of poem. A true love song. The only cc I would offer is in the last line you say: "Those tingling lips and that beating heart/Is a reminder of how I’m in love." The first is plural, the second is singular, and you end with "is" for singular. Somehow it doesn't sound right...it needs rephrasing, IMHO. At any rate, quite a good poem, and do keep writing.

PS I like your policy of not telling the exact circumstances the poem was written about; I don't like baring all that way either, and try not to.

Aw... but some much time has passed, how can those fond memories ever resurface? lovely poem, i can relate~

keep writing!

Maybe it was just me but the rhyming at times sounded a tad forced, but that was mere dust compared to the brilliance of words and beautiful imagery this sonnet provides! I love the final two lines! I don't think I could explain this feeling of love in any better way!

Wow, this is not as beautiful as your other poems, but more cute. Like a poem that makes you smile. Although cute isn't really the word either. I don't really know a word. It's not as romantic as your others but it's still quite good.

Much love,

S. A. Hereatta

Strong emotions in this I like the way this ended. The description is very real and I'm sure that people will relate to the feelings in this.

Keep it up.

Thanks for reviewing.

aw, sweet! ^^ i like this line:

"Your fingerprints marked upon my spirit"

very powerful; well written!

--K