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Reviews For: A Day Out

Nobody-n-Particular
2006-07-13
ch 1,
abuseIt was fun with the reference to Kevin Costner...
Learah Kaelar
2005-11-18
ch 1,
abuseAwesome! I've never even heard of Dorney Park, but I can relate it to going to six flags! Really great poem!

Blessed be!
Theory Of The 4th Dimension
2005-10-20
ch 1,
abuseWe...I wanna go to. This was a fun poem, lots of action going on. The imagery was adorable.
catseyeview
2005-10-01
ch 1,
abusesounds like a beautiful day!
mizu no kokoro
2005-09-20
ch 1,
abuseSound like such fun!!^^ aw... great job~

keep writing!
simpleplan13
2005-09-18
ch 1,
abuselol.. very fun
Kat-Renee Kittel
2005-09-12
ch 1,
abuseOh how fun! Sound like you had a great time. And from your descriptive imagery, I wanna go, too!!

Where is Dorney Park, by the way??
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