*whimpers* I want to know what happens in the rest of the story. Please write more!

ah! i love it! please continue soon!

The blood, oh the blood .:grins!:. What can I say, there's just a *thing* about crazy psycho killers that make them so damned attractive:p I saw your email on your homepage and was excited... do you happen too to be a fan of killua from hxh?! No matter if you're not... he's mine! *snatch* PWAHAHAHAHHAH! Slashy slashy. I'm more into shounen ai than yaoi, cos I like the development of intense emotion more than just action with (harldy) any storyline.

Anyway, this was an interesting start- there's some minor grammar/spelling glitches but generally it makes a wonderful opening for your story... we readers are intrigued! Is it a poltergist? Is it a ghost? Is it Casper?! Nice writing, and I hope to see you continue :o)

cheers and keep writing,

eyesofahuntress

Aww... this chapter was so short... the summary really caught me... You haven't updated in a while? Writer's block?

Wow! this is so cool! i luv stories with sadists. i cant wait for the next chappie! wen i red this i was practicalli, well how cud i put this... anyway ur story roks! definitely the thing he says last."I will hunt you down"*shivers* wow! u reli got talent. in ur summary it says they meet again, i wonder how her reaction be, will she run away screaming? or will she just be paralyzied with fear? this is gunna be sum interestin story.

“You came today, “he spoke happily while moving towards her.

She shifted back in fright. Her head bowed down, refusing to meet his eyes. Her body jerked violently as she felt her back came in contact with the wall. No more place to run.By the way this paragraphs bin written u can tell she's terrified of him. lol, duh he did of course kill and make people suffer gruesomely in her eyes.anywayz plz UPDATE! im dyin 2 kno wot happens next. haha. this sure is gunna be a interestin stori.

Wow, I'm intrigued! Can't wait to see what happens! It's great so far, so update soon!

O, this is good. Update soon please.

Ah you made this a while ago, I keep checking back to see if you updated. Keep going the killer guy seems hot...Um moving on, you should continue and hurry up with this!

Holy crap! UPdate! I beg of yoU! This is great! I can't wait to see what will happen! UPDATE PLEASE AND THANK YOU!

Truly sadistic. I don't mind you writing a new story even though you're in the midst of doing Make you Mine, but this story is impressive. It more than makes up for it. Is the girl a ghost? Anyway, I hope to see more physical contact and the delightful terror (?) and suspesnse you weaved up in your story. Good job!

This is pretty cool, update soon.

Very catchy beginning. It makes me interested in why she's not able to be killed by him, etc.

A few grammar things. You have some issues where the computer messed up on you, and you change tenses a few times here and there. Still, it's a good, interesting story.

One thing I would suggest is having a separating line between the author's notes and your actual story.

Hope to see you update soon.

wow interesting start!..cant wait for an update:)

Great first chapter! It was very intresting and you had just the right amount of descriptions without going overbaord. Truly amazing. This story scream with potential so keep up the good work and update soon please!

Lol, as soon as I saw your email I decided to read this, since I have a bit of spare time in the mornings (yay)! i love sadists. They're fun! haha. Wow, how morbid did that sound?

You said your writing is immature? Well, that isn't exactly true. I've seen much more immature, trust me. This is good! The only thing that gets to me is you switch tenses every now and then.

" For he gets angry when she tries to plead for his victims, he would often prolong their pain further just to see her look of despair , knowing that she cannot help anyone"

should be

"For he would get angry when she tried to plead for his victims, he would often prolong their pain further just to see her look of despair , knowing that she couldn't help anyone".

and

"Her body jerked violently as she felt her back came in contact with the wall."

should be

"Her body jerked violently as she felt her back come in contact with the wall."

and lastly

" She shook her head in terror, but she knew that he can’t harm her. He knew that too. He had tried to kill her when she first appeared to him, but the knife just went through her. Strangling doesn’t work either. Only simple touches like grabbing or holding her will work. Or sometimes, even …kisses"

should be

" She shook her head in terror, but she knew that he couldn't harm her. He knew that too. He had tried to kill her when she first appeared to him, but the knife just went through her. Strangling didn't work either. Only simple touches like grabbing or holding her would work. Or sometimes, even …kisses."

Weewoo! Anyways. The sadist in this story is really. . . really sadistic. like, wow. -shudder- Alright, you've caught my attention, haha. I'll be watching this piece!