Very intense, with a papable sense of foreboding. The only discordant theme to me was the infidelity. It seemed that he really loved her and yet cheated on her. That should have been at the front of his mind the whole time.

creepy

to answer your question: yes & no, it depends on my mood. ;) really, I do believe in heaven.

alright, enough with the sillies. onto the review!

alright, that was one sick and twisted ride. the whole thing is amazing. you can add such amazing twists to some cliches (which this wasn't) and make it seem fresh and alive. that takes talent. I love how there isn't so much dialogue, just straight to the point and needed insistantly. it just flows, really beautifully might I add. it's seriously one of the best things I've read in a while.

~* as beauty dies *~

Sarah its Bal. His stories are alomst always misearable and if its happy at the beginning, its horrifying at the end. Lol, nice super twist there! God i liked this one! Although its basically like mots of your horror stories.

If you will excuse the expletive, this was ** twisted. Yeah, I had thought that she was, you know, waiting for him in Heaven because of all the clichés in the world about that sodding plot device. No, it didn't really come as a surprise at the end, though that didn't make it any less twisted, you psychopath, you.

You can take that as a compliment, if you want. >

Oh my god! That's... That's...

Do you have to make all stories so miserable?

You just made me define "A matchmade in Heaven" with a whole new meaning there. It's kinda creepy, in a way...