BRILLIANT STORY!
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OMG! why did u make him go away? so. not. fair.

o, and i know a family with two pairs of twis--two girls and a girl and a boy. they rn't that bad, actually.

this is THE best story EVERY in the history of fictionpress!
i love love lvoe it!!
please update it soon! it would mean a whole lot!

oh my gosh. that is just the cutest thing with the kids and
all. hehe, this has been my favorite chapter so far!

I absolutely and completely love this story, its really really well written. I laughed, almost cried a couple times, it was so sweet. I really hope that this isnt the end of it (nearly died when I came across the post closer to the beginning saying that you weren't going to write it for a while). I got majorly attatched to the characters in such a short time, awesome story, awesome charactors I loved it! :)

Mari

hm...this is lovely, but i feel like its missing 'spark' somehow. you paced it quite nicely in the beginning, but then the chapters move too fast and one scene seems to jump over another,,making the flow of the story not as smooth as it could have been.
that aside, i love it

oh no. no no no. you can't just STOP! that's not right. unfair. worth suing over problem. i don't even get a chapter over there wedding or preparing for the wedding and i spent so long reading ALL of this. yet i don't get to read their happy ending. boo. boo-hoo.
:| GR.
haha. yeah um update? is in need much? you know you want to. :D

hey!! i really really liked it! it was really good! i want u 2 b able 2 get one or 2 more chaptrs up; u kno like telling us bout the weeding ryan and evan, the band, kier and winter kids...im sure u get what im going at! lol! what i thought was really weird is my last name in Durham!! and when i saw the alyssa durham i was like woah! its my last name! and durhams not that commom either! lol! i hope u can message me back! and i eally really did like it alot!
xoxo
Elizziebeth DURHAM-lol
(patsprincess12)

I LOVE THIS STORY! So amazing! I can't write anything like this... Please update, if you can!!
~The Kindergartener (who's impatiently waiting)

Love, love, love your story.

The characters are all so cute, and it really comes together well.

and omg i am so excited to hear about their wedding.

And I hope their is no trouble in Paradise.

this is such a beautiful story! i love it so much!!
and kier and his male pride... dont we all wish we had a kier of our own!! i've read Im With Him and Castle Hill and they're both wonderful!! WA!

a;slkdjvkewa;mk;lkjla!

omg, i am in LOVE with Kier! i think his personality is SO cute!
and winter's personality is awesome too!
Ryan and Evan sound like the cutest little kids EVER!

UPDATE SOON! :]

sweet stuff...is this the end??

Great chapter...I'm happy that they are getting married...I love them...cant wait to read more!

hm ... my review just got deleted. so i had to make a new one. :(
anyway i think this is SIMILAR to wat i sed ...
hoo YEAH MAN! XD THEYRE GETTING MARRIED! :)
i was like HM very suspicious ... when it mentioend how weird he was acting. and im thinking ... is he gonna propose? hm ... unlikely ... BUT BUT BUT... THEY'RE GONNA WEAR WEDDING STUFF! XD
:)
hell yeah i love this.
o yeah, btw, the story is different to wat i thought it was rly about when i read the summary. i mean, he doesn't RALY pursue her does he? i mean, she liked him too! and lifes been awesome for them except for the mum thing, but that only lasted for a few chapters ... i dunno.
but never forget, i love this story, so dont think im turning all cryptic or something. :)

ciao!! :3