aw! i love this chapter! update soon! Merry Christmas!

before i start i would just like to say...

(wait 4 it)

Im getting married!

lol jkz ;)

srsly, i am SO sorry that I DIDNT REVIEW WHEN U POSTED IT UP! IM SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO xinfinity sorry! -huggles-...so yeah...

so hi...its me...i know, ur probably mad that i didnt review straight away coz i normally do or that u thot that i abandoned ur story (dont worry hun, i wont do that :D) so yeah...but ive got freaking 145 author alerts in my inbox so like yeah...o.o"... hehe..."...

but seriously... SO GLAD THAT KIER ISNT CHEATING...or is he? -nudge nudge- -wink wink- okay okay, im being mean...

cute XD btw, good luck w/your studies :D

I feel like a complete and total idiot. This whole time I was clueles to the fact that I never reviewed chapter sixteen. Absolutely clueless. And, I'm a bit sorry for that. If I actually had been thinking straight, at all, for the past month then maybe I would have noticed, but I didn't. Not to mention I almost bipassed the little orange thingy in my review history telling me you had updated.

Ugh, I need to stop ranting. Anyway...

The normal wonderful story, I'm so glad that Kier had an explination for the whole Alyssa thing or I might have been tempted to kill the witch. Jessica is my type of girl, Vanessa is just like the kind of people I put behind bars for a night of detox. Have i ever said that you have way more talent then me? It's true...

Keep up the great work.

hey. just read this for the first time. I love it so far. The beginning almost turned me off coz it didnt really seem like my kinda story, but i gave it a chance and im so glad i did. PLEASE UPDATE SOON, i cant wait to read more.

O_O the lack of conflicts is sort of freaking me out.. do you have some kind of super blowup coming up soon? 0-o very suspicious XD winter and kier are too cute though. i loved the scene with the sunglasses. they are so . reading about gorgeous people is amusing.

until next time _

Whats wrong with fictionpress? I think the author's alert thingy is so not working for me. I didnt even know that you updated your story. Rahh. Anyway, hopefully Kier wont get hooked to another girl and stay true to Winter. I think they make a great couple! (:

Mush, mush, tons of mush mush scenes. xD Love them!

Erm..but just wondering, since both Winter and Kier are both happy, does that mean that the story is going to end soon, or are the two of them going to have to deal with tons of other stuff and problems as well? . Just wondering...Update soon.

great chapter! i love this story your a great writer! i understand where your coming from with the exams, middle school exams are enough!

AAHH! OH YEAH BABY! *pumps fist* I knew Kier was waayy to cool to ever ever ever (plus a kazillion more ever's) EVER cheat on Winter. And yeah, baby! Cali rocks!

I didn't cry LAST chapter, silly. I cried last LAST chapter, when you know, you wrote the most beautiful thing in the world.

"He waves. He puts a finger under his right eye, then waggles it at me.

No crying.

I sniff the tears back, keeping them at bay. I salute him sharply, smiling despite the lonely feeling inside of me.

Yes sir.

That’s my girl."

Remember? rememeber? REMEMBER? hahahaha. Then you responded to my review, asking "DID YOU CRY?" Hence my response. So HA! I win! :)

ANYWAYS..oh. my. gosh. GIVE ME KYLE! I WANT KYLE! HE is soo awesome dude. That boy.

And worry not. Your updates aren't THAT slow; like omgosh chiclets, I think you're amazing for getting back to writing right after exams. Some authors take forever (and a day) to update, and I understand that they have lives. As do you, grasshopper. Take your time! (hmm..should I really be saying that?) Your chapters are always worth the wait. :D

Thank you for updating!

;)allie

I absolutely WORSHIP this story! Oh my god, Winter is awesome. yeah! I love Mischa and Jaden...*sigh* I miss them. CAstle Hill right? aw, I'm jealous of Winter. She's soo...perfect. Its kind of intimidating to read what she does because I'm always thinking, Damn...

okay. Update soon,

Avey

Hey, I'm in college too so I completely understand you being too busy to update! I just found your story, and read all of it this morning. I'm really liking it! Keep up the good work...

I read this all in one go... It's great!

Update soon!

soo...the whole alyssa bit was no big deal, eh? that's good...but are there gonna be any problems in the future for kier and winter? i like the whole cliche theme of the story...cuz i love & love 'em, but there are gonna be high points, like cliff-hangers, right?

*deep breath* hm now i don't mind hugging that boyo...sweet adorable teddy bear, i like how sweet both of them were considering had i been in place of winter i would have let kier freeze the girl...intoxiacated or not...since u took the alyssa thing off here you go *one chocolate cookie* it wud have been chocochip but u took a month! last time i said update soon and ur exams came up so this time take ur sweet time to update :)

tnt ciao