Aw! I loved this story, it took me 2 days to read it all! I couldn't believe it when I saw that it was the ending. I was a little sad not to see Winter's boys in the hospital with the baby like 'Hello little brother' or anything but I absolutely LOVED it!

I loved this story, and I absolutely can't wait to read Castle Hill. I'm a little ashamed to admit that I read this entire story in one night, but I wanted to let you know how much of a page-turner you've created here. Wonderful work! I just wish I had enough...whatever...to actually finish a story as long as this one. My hat's off to you, and Thank you so much for this wonderful time you've given me :)

Really love how you ended the story! I'm glad you tied up the loose end with Damian too... *grins* I really enjoyed reading this story...Keep writing! and good luck in your future endeavors!

AW. This was so cue. LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

it totally made my day :)

Ri

i absolutly ADORE this story. it was sweet, romantic, funny, and entertaining. i commend your writing talent and wish that i could one day be as good a writer as you. i have read a lot of stories where the girl meets a player in a band and they fall in love, BUT i have to say that this is the BEST one i have read.

hey wow! i just read ur whole story (in like 2 days!) and it was awesome! i loved it a lot. I liked how u replied to a lot of peoples comments too (took me a while to figure that one out though :D) I was completely blown away by the entire plot line; it was just so good! It wasnt intricate, just plain and simple, yet so... idk... AMAZING! yeah. Is there like some sort of sequal? cuz i would love that! it doesnt really call for a sequal though so... Ah well, its ur AMAZING story!

lizzy*

And here I thought that there will be two dogs, which Win wished for. Oh well, there's two demanding kids already xD I love this, how it all ends well!

GREAT STORY! i absolutly loved it. Keep up the good wrighting, your talented. )

I love this story, especially Kier ! lol. Anyways, great job! )

I generally like the story line in the begining... but then you get kind of jumpy! If you ever get bored and need something to do you might want to consider rewriting/editing this story. I think that you could do a lot of cool things with making the situations more developed. You could try to connect to one of the characters emotions and explain everything through their eyes. Try putting yourself in their shoes... Do you really think that she would act that way with people she's never even met before (her grandparents and brothers)? She would more than likely be a little timid... especially since you decided to throw in the abuse in the begining... someone that has been abused doesn't generally trust someone they've never met. Also... a lot of the things that are happening are kind of confusing. You migt want to try having someone read what you have written before you've posted it in the furure... Good lick with all of your future writing

aww poor girl. Im so glad she got help )

Aww...it's so sweet!

Sy

Awwh...and we came a full circle...Is this the end? Will there be a epilogue...Come to think of it you have yet to tied up the situating with Damian...

Wait, is that it?

The wedding sounded magical. I loved the idea of the different coloured converses.

Aw ! What a beautiful chapter! It was so nice !

I loved the story :)