 sunday night sky 2005-09-22 . chapter 1omg! i never normally like poetry that rhymes (even though some of mine does...) but i LOVE that poem! :) |
 AchtungBabyAchtung 2005-09-22 . chapter 1Hey! nice going, rhythym slightly confused but i'm not convinced that doesnt add to the emotion. anyhoo thanks for reviewing. iz x ps. how old is third form? i live in london and im very confused! |
 lora hynes 2005-09-15 . chapter 1hey tanaboo i finally registered! im lovin dis poem nd dat ill always be here for you! love you no matter what mwah lula x |
 eimz052 2005-09-13 . chapter 1hey tanis!! im alwayz here for you no matter wat!! brill poem!! love ya so much eimz x x x |
 Emmaline 2005-09-12 . chapter 1I am here always will be. love you tanaboo. xemmalinex |
 DemonChildLost 2005-09-12 . chapter 1this is a beautiful piece..filled wiv so much emotion and feelin...it amazin..
~Laura |