I like the way its written. I think people can relate to it, awesome work.

Hey Hidden! Thanks so much for the review. It's always a pleasure and a blessing to hear from you. Merry Christmas to you too! Just wanted to say hello and thank you.

Also, I liked this poem. It was nicely crafted. Keep improving and keep writing!

This is amazing, I think a lot of people can relate and that last stanza was really powerful! I like your poetry! I'm gonna go read some more! ^_^

Much love, Rosanna.

oh, but the world is so very cruel~~ good work, i like the emotions portrayed~

keep writing!

I liked the emotion in this...kind of saying you are home, but it's not the place you want to call home...interesting.

Extremely powerful and well written. The nature of wanting to go home. You should be proud of this one!

~Hawke

I like this, very well written. The last stanza is really strong and the whole poem is really deep. Well done. QueenVixta

very emotion packed...i liked it...is this real? If it is...its sad, but still good nonetheless...soz i havent reviewd in ages^_^ Keep up da awesum work^_^

This seems wierd since I just reviewed a poem by Nebelfee that contained the same content about being locked in a cage!! Good poem.

oh cool. i'm reminded of that three days grace song. but this was different. very cool. we love.

i like this...i know what you mean and the feelings in this i can relate to so much...well done...this is beautiful. lots of love ~AC~

aw poppetje!! *hug*it's all gonna be fine!! Im sure!good poem btw!!

kusjes

Ah! Are you okay hunni?? I hope you are doing alright.. Hang in there...*sigh* Don't let certain people bring you down. No matter what they say or do...*muah* I love you!

Breaking free to fly is important. If you look closely at your cage, however, you might find that you were the one who built it. With this knowledge, you can unbuild it as well.

Later...

beautifully written. i can completely relate.