I really love this story, I remember reading this a long time ago and never having a chance to leave a review, so here I am.^^ I fell in love with your first story, In His Shadows and I've always checked on your profile for new stories. It's been a long time but are you still writing? If you are I would love to read more of your talent. :D I've always wondered what Maurizio was always saying to her in the story. Good luck with whatever your doing now. ^^ :)

i love this story!

I agree with becaboo14! This story deserves many more reviews than just 14 so that is why I am updating! To tell you that this is a great story that you should update! *smirk* And also to guit trip:

WAH! *crying waterfalls* WHY?! WHY?! DON'T YOU CARE ANYMORE?!*pouts* Please make this a story and a one-shot.PLEASE!GIVE IN TO MY PUPPY DOG EYES! WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

*ahem*

P.S.To contradick the fact that I appear mad(and proud of it! ^_~)I will accually make a sane suggestion. If you continue this story(PLEASE DO! I'm BEGGING!I'm not asking for 20 chapters just a few more to finish the story FULLY!;_;)you should make translations. I'm dieing to know what the he said in drow!

P.S.S.

Sorry for the spelling errors if there are(which there probably is, I misspelled WHY earlier). I'm too lazy to go check and I suck at spelling.

P.S.S.S.(man this gets annoying)

If you can, please update "Two Worlds, One Love". I'm too tired to do another guilt trip and I can't remember if I reviewed that one yet.

Continue. That's an order! Haha! Just foolin' with yah. But really, this is great, not only is it on my favorites list, but I'm more than definetly adding you to my favorite authors. And I really really really realy do wish that you'd continues with this. You left it at a bit of a cliffie, and it's just so well, written and everything... Bleh, please continue with this? I'm begging you! *laughs* I'd admit I beg a lot of people to continue with their one shots, but this is too good to be -just- a oneshot, you know? Well, I don't. Know, I mean.

Anyway! I enjoyed this very much! PLEASE, PLEASE, AND PLEASE AGAIN continue with this? It deserves much more than just 14 reveiws (haah, 14 is my lucky number)... But yet again, PLEASE CONTINUE?!

I loved it and didn't find much to complain about... but I'd like to know a bit more of what she looks like, and of her past (if you decide to continue after all of this whinning)

I really do wish that you'll continue...T.T

I like this story! And I also just wanted to point out that you accidentally spelled "greet" as "great" in the sentence where u said "she'd great him like she usually did, with a smile and clean room."

:)

I do wish you would continue this story! I'm just dying to know what would happen next. :) Your writing style is very intriguing and your creative ideas whet my appetite. Honestly, it is so hard to find a good story these days here on this site. Yes, yes, you have a good style and your story is utterly romantic, but some things just don't make sense. For instance, how could she know she has a virus? It could actually be a bacterial infection or maybe she ate something bad (and she could even speculate if she was pregnant...). I know that you as the all-knowing author would know she has a virus, or we as readers would know she has a virus, but unless Adalgisa has some sort of background in sicknesses, it doesn't make any sense that she would know exactly what was wrong with her.Yeah, that was my little rant. :( Nothing personal, and don't take my complaint to heart (I'm sure you have heard much worse things). I truly do like your story.

this was really good! adding on might be a good idea, or you could leave it how it is. but the end really is quite tantalizing.when fantasy happensaka michelle

I absolutely loved it! This would make a great full length story and I hope that you will continue it.

Aw...that's a sweet story. :) I like it. Short and sweet...

Omg! I loved this short story! You always seem to capture the passion and interactions between the characters so well... I wish that you would make this a longer story but none the less it is really good! Awesome job!

~*~Southern Siren~*~

Ah darling, you don't know how grateful I am that you continue to satisfy my libido-fied reading needs. This one shot was like a quickie-of-eternal-goodness and oh dear god I think I need therapy. It reminds me of In His Shadows, which by the way, is my favorite story on fictionpress. At first, I was thinking she was sick because she's pregnant. If it wasn't a one shot, that would be interesting to persue. OR! What if..Ashly became pregant with Jerome's sexy love child and whehahaha that would suck for her. Well, sorry for this pointless and self-satisfying review but I really do love your work. :goes off to picture Jerome as an adorable father cuddling his little baby.:

i think it needs a sequal! awsome as usual!

This seems really interesting, even though I don't know what Maurizo says. . . or any of the words he said O.O'

O... More? Please?