a sort of melancholy beauty, like a rainy day. Just wanted to put this on my favorites list. I can't really coment on your poem, it said it all.

I enjoyed the last stanza most. "She knows all about falling and fading and dying". A very powerful line.

The poor girl described in this poem. She is disillusioned by the world too!

Better than some of the other more recent ones. But you know how I am about poetry. Especially the stuff that doesn't rhyme.

Lulling and soothing. Voices of a wanderer and hopeful for the future.