I admit that I didn't read every single word you wrote - I skipped here and there - but I liked what I did read. I think a lot of people need to get over their dislike, fear or whatever it is they feel towards homosexual people - male or female. Haha, the chances are you'll probably go to Hell for a whole slew of OTHER things rather than just for liking another person of the same sex. BOOZE WERE MADE FOR A REASON, and it wasn't to get the Barney song out of peoples' heads, let me tell you. ;D

"OMG! GAY PERSON! DISEASE! DISEASE! QUARANTINE IT! WHERE'S BUSH TO THINK IT'S CONTAGIOUS?!" I think...?

Otherwise, I liked it; it was strong - informatively so. Might you be interested in being introduced to italics? Or, perhaps if you've already met, going on a treasure hunt to find them (they tend to run away... a lot). I promise there'll be good clues. And pirates. You can't have a treasure hunt without pirates.

Anyways, thank you for the read and another opinion to ponder on.

- A.

Hiya! It's me, Flame. I agree completely with your entire point! *waves rainbow flag* W00t!

I liked this. The writing's good, and you expressed your thoughts well. More people need to believe what you're saying. I'm straight, but I pride myself on being a tolerant person. After all, a marriage is a marriage--whether it's a guy and guy or a girl and a girl or a guy and girl...what does it matter?

"I snort when I laugh and I hate it." Boy, do i identify.

You tell 'em, Adam, you tell 'em...

ADAM!

I missed you when i wasn't on aspenda! and your writing has way improved. is this all you, or do you have someone checking over your stuff? Anway, great job.

*hunts down evil homophobes who bashed Adam*

and the goat quote is way cool.

You go, Adam... you tell them. We luff ya, Adam!

I think you sound like a nice guy. I don't care if you are gay. My mom is a priest and she doesn't think people go to hell for being gay. I don't either.

-Emma from Maplewood, NJ

Yay Adam! You rawk, man.

And I respect you for it. Peace.

-Saluvril Andromeda Lunaris

aw I really like this. I'm very religious, so at first I was kinda against gay marriage...then my religion teacher said that there was nothing wrong with it. She said that God created people that way etc...very well written, I really liked this =)

~*Toni*~

First off, I applaud you for daring to come out like this. I am a bisexual girl myself, and I know how you feel.

Secondly, this should really be on your blog or website. Sorry, I am picky when it comes to people posting stuff where it doesn't belong - essay section is for essays, thank you!

Now, if you really want me to review your article, I'd say it is quite well written, and it makes a good impact on the reader about gay people.

Go Gay pride!

Hah. I find your tone perfectly polite, if a little frayed from having to put up with such. . .and I was able to get through it without losing interest. You are indeed quite a decent writer. Hmm. . .different, but I like it. Mayhaps I'm mellowing. . .

Kat

Oh, I very much like this. It's very refreshing and inspiring. You're a pretty good writer. I am bisexual and I have a learning disability my self. So this really hit home for me. My only comment. Is that this reads more like a biography to me. Rather then an essay. However, that's just what I think.

I don't really care if someone tells me 'I'm going to hell'. Or 'Screw you **'. I don't really even believe in heaven or hell (I'm Pagan my self.) So that really doesn't bother me. I just try to blow it all off and make fun of every thing (when I can.)

Good writing though.

You know, this may sound cruel, or maybe freaky, but, I need a gay friend. Don't ask me why, I just do. I've got so many /diverse/ friends, and all I need is some gay friends.

I'm personally straight, and have no gay friends, but, I am totally for gay marriage, it doesn't matter if a guy wants to marry his male boyfriend, I'm totally for that, considering, many gay guys would probably have a better chance of getting married then I would... so, let'em... and that's just my opinion.

I don't care what you are, but you're a decent writer. Hey, that makes two essay posts today by people who actually know how to write a little--I think that's a record.