Reviews for A Factor of the Mirage

Als 2006-11-29 ch 1,	I really like this. It's beautiful, and, as always, powerful. I like the concept of saying "Just give me your pills/Because I need to keep pretending." It makes me think of hallucinogens (sp?), and it's really cool. (I dunno if that was your intent, but it's neat. I dunno if I could describe exactly how it all plays out in my head, but whatev.) I have so many fav lines in here, though. Brava! Luv, ~Als
vballgurl154 2005-09-18 ch 1,	I like the parts seperatly... but im not sure they make a lot of sence together. im not really sure... im kind of distracted right now so it might just me be :D but it definetly doesnt suck!
Faerie 2005-09-15 ch 1,	I think this is perfect and I can obviously relate. Beautoiful work, love.
darkpaladin13 2005-09-13 ch 1,	I also agree, great job of writing here.
Nimnengil Parmanole 2005-09-12 ch 1,	it most decidedly does not suck. it is quite excelent!and you should know by now that i'm not good at giving any type of criticism on poetry. "I love you, you know want to believe…" good line!
Seth Triskellion 2005-09-12 ch 1,	yeah... i agree here. well well written, very good, cryptic yet easy to understand. I love it