Eh, that was clever. I didn't really notice why you bolded those words until I read the poem back through, and then a "duh" moment hit me. *smacks head* I'm very smart sometimes. Anyways, I think your poem has good rhythm, and the flow of it wasn't forced in any parts. I found it very easy to read, and the content was rather amusing to me. Kudos on you, mate. Good poem. *pats*