Very interesting. The characters are all good story-wise and the plot well-developed. That probably sounds very, very silly. Anyways, I enjoyed the read.

And another great chapter! I don't know if you planned this, but there's a character named Theran in here, and then the country's name is Thera. I think that's so cool if you didn't! *keeps reading* So Jonathan was the man we saw at the beginning of the chapter! Coolio. Wow, killing her bodyguards? THis guy better be good. Then again he's already good in sword fighting and keeping Elana under control to his limits before the scene with David and him.

~Jane

In other words, it's me, o-dragon, from FF.net. I absolutely love your story and I see a lot of great potential with your writing. There was one place though that I didn't really understand, "'It would politically better for Chevin to marry Elizabeth Tankent'". I think you left out the word, "be" in there. And also when they were formally introducing themselves I got lost with who said what. Otherwise, great, but I'll have to read more later. ~Jane (Olivia)

Wow- this is a really good story. I liked this chapter. How does it end?

are you kidding me?! only 2 ppl have been reviewing you?! this story and you deserve so much more for the amount of work youve put into the story. the plot, the descriptions, everything is so...set. its like jk rowling or christopher paolini's writing, but somehow better. and i think that elana and jonathan's attitudes towards eachother are hilarious. its so funny how they like eachother one minute, but then hate eachother the next. i cannot wait for the next chapter, so keep writing! ~wintertigress

Oh, so sweet. Hurray for another chapter. And thank god it's Friday.

Khazia*~

Wow, this is a really catching story so far! I'm liking the conflict and I can't WAIT to see what a mess she gets into.. GREAT JOB! I think this is my new fave story!

Ooh, yayness. Another chapter brings me joy. So much sadness. Poor Chevin. I miss him. And now I must go, for the bell is about to ring. But perhaps I can e-mail you tonight.

Ton amie,Khazia*~

Isn't it strange how our anger can often be deflated so easily?Sorry I haven't reveiwed sooner, mon amie. I can't read the next chapter until tomorrow, either. But this one was nicely done.

Ton amie,Khazia*~

Great chapter, mon amie. E, how does Jonathon know all these horses? And these people? I can't wait for more!

Khazia*~

I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed before this! My mind is like a sive, I swear. Great chapter, though. I loved the ending...Elana has a habit of killing her bodyguards. Something tells me that the l's will be substituted with s's before long. Nicely done, mon amie.

Khazia*~

E! Sadness! Chevin is dead! But then, I sort of expected it, I suppose. It actually made the story better. And the princess pulled off a lovely royal swoon.I found it interesting that Chevin's sister was named Skylar. I love that name, but more importantly, I'm writing a story about a girl named Skylar right now.This was amazing, mon amie. I don't know how you can come up with stuff like this, but the whole world and everything...brilliant. I cannot wait for another installment.

Khazia*~