YES. You are my hero.

LOL...this was random...but it was really good...lol...well done^_^

Nice twist, I appreciate that.

Am I supposed to think of those fights blaming videogames for violence? Because I am. ~_~ Steaming load of bull in my opinion, but that's what this made me think of.

Very funny poem, nonetheless.

this is good...very nice twist on a fairy tale...well done...i love it. lots of love ~AC~

I have never read a poem that said "That", but I guess in modern terms that's how it would work. Goldie Locks is such an interesting character in fairy tales. I never really liked her, I mean who is this girl who's going into people's houses and eating their food, and sleeping in their beds; who would go into someones house and sleep in a strangers bed. It baffles me. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.