I read this chapter months ago when you first wrote it, but then I stopped because I found your spelling to be terrible and took it as a sign of your incompetence. I find that I was wrong. I read your other story, Daddy's Little Girl, and found it to be extremely well-written. That fact leads me to believe that you just didn't spell check this one. Yeah, anyway, sorry. This IS an interesting story, so far. And I'm going to stop typing right now. :)

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