aw... if only such a love can exist for me~~ good poem~ very touching~

keep writing!

I loved this! The imagery was amazing, and the feeling behind it... i was blown away.

Recognizing that life of others continues on inspite of the deep loss within that is experienced and felt...

That night follows day and breaths continue..only in an aloneness profound.

Beautifully expressed.

Very sad and beautiful.

Beautifully written. Lovely, vibrant descriptions. It nearly made me cry..I can especially empathise with the lines:"The world is as it should be.And yet it does not feel that way."I hate parting with my lover...but yet it seems all the more joyful when we are together again.

I am absolutely lost for words. The use of colour was brilliant and that ending is just astounding. can't tell you how much I love this, well done.

Wow, vair powerful. Beautifully done. Love the ending although it was vair sad. Great job on a lovely poem!

Much love,

S. A. Hereatta

True Child of the Xenu

The visualisations in this poem were truly remarkable, i particularly loved the use of colours. Enjoyable read!