Lovely, dear. One of your best ideas so far. And actually, it does happen. People are cruel.your a/n is so true. write more.

An everyday tragedy translated into poetry. Uncomfortable to read, but so true. Good job.

Well, I have no idea what I can say...it's a sad story and you put it to a good format to get a point across.

I agree with you to an extent. I do think that the problems facing people and or children with mental disabilities is a travisty to say the least. However I'm not really sure about the story as you prosented it in this. The wife in a coma and the father saying give it up for adoption; I guess I can't see someone being so harsh in this situation. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.