it seems like you did, you showed that jacka$$ who's boss, likes change, is optimistic (spelling!) always there for people, and won't let just anyone into her heart. sounds like my kinda friend. _

*Skye

wow...

"here for you now. there for you then."

like those lines and the last two lines too.

love,Mister

p.s. you're sitting next to me right now too!

Somewhere over the rainbow where...blah blah blah...forgot the lines again.

i like! third line down favorite...and the seventh too!.

love ya,Mister

p.s. you're sitting next to me

i love the overall format and how the words just flow together. it's really an amazing little poem

Very good, I loved how the words just hit you when you read this, i really enjoyed it. if you like, i would love to share work with you. i love talking to other authors. espically one who can write as well as u. email