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| Edwit 2005-11-08 ch 1,  | abuseHow pretty. It was extremely colorful, with an underlying grey tone, if you understand my meaning. It had a dark sense to it, if you will. Yeah.. I liked this.. Taking innocence and showing just how corrupted one could turn to be. Yeah... Very nicely done. -Robin |
| Kirona of the skies 2005-09-15 ch 1, | abuseYet another poem I can relate to all too well. I want to talk to you...the next time I'm actually gonna be around in the evening is Saturday. So, call me. |
| katie-chan 2005-09-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseKeep the room around. Maybe you'll wake up and be that little girl again someday... |
| Louellena 2005-09-13 ch 1, | abuseI don't know what got into my head, but...§Forget not dear childIt cannot be that black...§ Really, that's what went through my mind. ~LuLu~ |