omgosh! That was so beautiful! Best one of all.

As I was reading it, I was reminded of a flower, slowly budding before my eyes. It was gorgeous. Thank you for that. ^_^

The rhyme scheme was absolutely genius! Wow. That was just too cool for words.

I *lovedlovedloved* it. Keep writing!

you know i've been through something like you are going through right now. But I bet you DO have friends. and your thoughts of everyone making fun of you is more a paranoid insecurity than a reality. (I'm a psych major :)) the poem, on the other hand, is well written. the point is received well.