I like this, great work!

Wonderful.

gorgeous and dreamy and flawless and faraway. dangerous combination.

love love love.

wow such profound meaning to unveil

keep writing!

marvelous.

i love the images it brings up.

oh is perfection

Aw this is very sweet. you're very clever writing in such an elegant but coded manner. Excellent job!

-Please review some of my recent poems-[[SagaciousPnay]]

Fantastic. I loved the entire thing. Beautiful. I must say, I loved "& she touches her third eye with a smile, cause it's burning bright (& she knows the reasons why)" You captured everything nicely and I love your wording. It was beautiful.

prettyful, i like it

Love! Especially, ' she clamps her eyes shut & pools the wishmagic against her lids.'

such a different & style, no? :)

I love it. the whole thing sends such pleasent tingles down my spine and inspires me so greatly. *steals this and runs* can I say much more? you have talent, I steal plan on stealing it. shows how enviousselfish I am of you. your poetry is godly.

* noelle

Oh, beautiful.

& she touches her third eye with a smile, cause it's burning bright-This is really a "poets" poem (or to me it is) its like writers live within their third eye, they use it just as much as their everyday sight and its always burning bright with some kind of art form.

Much love,Juliet.