   Kurt Wagner 2007-08-04 . chapter 1hahaha.
love. |
 hey maria 2006-01-09 . chapter 1You = genius. |
 Chandra-Moon 2005-12-17 . chapter 1I like how stilted formality of this (I'm hoping that means what I think it means; oh well). That being said, I less than three the killers. |
 the naked civil servant 2005-11-26 . chapter 1hehehe. excellence. |
 Spawn of Hell 2005-11-14 . chapter 1Wah. That's funny. I love the summary too; it actually makes you want toread the poem. And the poem itself is good. You're all philosophical and end with 'I still think you play the Killers too loud.' lol. nice. (useless babble: In my house, I'm actually the one who listens to music at a very high decibel level... :P hum... but usually when i do want to listen to music with the volume high, i plug my mp3 player in my ears(well the earphones evidently).) |
 Sillygoose49 2005-10-14 . chapter 1Hey!Awesome poem, and kind of funny. I've always liked your work.SillygoosePS: Since you asked my poetry has been posted under: cricetoverde. |
 the big sleep 2005-10-06 . chapter 1This is ** great! Free verse, which I'm a big fan of, and it's just all around fantastic.
Keep this stuff up. |
 Sun Chime 2005-09-20 . chapter 1Awesome, I love the humor, and I can relate perfectly... my sister will never get tired of loud music! Great job...you're sentence construction is really cool. Also, thanks for the review and a very Happy Birthday to you! |
 Aslan Israel 2005-09-19 . chapter 1Know exactly how that feels... stupid brother. hehe. Nice job. |
 mizu no kokoro 2005-09-16 . chapter 1lol~ the last line was rather cute~
keep writing! |
 poetic abortion 2005-09-13 . chapter 1XD
I'll say it again.
XD
alright, fun over (aw~!). ok. first off I want to say: I love you. you write about something so COMON amongst siblings with such ease and utter wit. I love the abrupt and just hilarius ending. with me it is Mariah Carey who is played so loud. *sighs* brilliant piece, my sides shall ache till Tuesday.
~* noelle |
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