Very good. Discusses a point I've always wondered about: why can relationships never forget their pasts? You may have sparked something in me, I can almost see my next poem brewing.

(I'm on a romantic language keyboard right now and it just took me about five minutes to type that.)

Btw, thanks for reviewing my stuff.

nicely strung together. i like it. ;0

lovely

I like this. It lingers... somewhat. There seems to be a lot of thought put into this, and I love your last two lines. Reminds me of Kenshin. Um, forget I typed that.

Beautiful poem you exoressed your emotions so well

keep writing!

I love the rawness of this; it just feels like the words literally sliped off of your soul like water and onto the page, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

whoa awesome. you did a really great job. keep it up.