I just had a picture of a black crisp room, with pink rose petals floating down slowly and then you coming out from the background like a faded image, with tears that fell from your eyes and then the droplets turned in mid descent to soft pink flower petals. You wore a kimono and you were kneeling. Then it changed your petals dried on the ground in front of you and some petals touched your hands, they and you slowly blew away into the breeze as beautiful dried pink rose petals

That is telling alot of wisdom, thats really good...

this is really good, it sounds like u really meant it

I really love this; the first few verses were breathtaking and the style that you used was amazing, it brought so much to your words. I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.