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| The Astronaut 2006-04-22 ch 1, | Seriously, longer pieces work better for you. Your little tiny haiku things don't make any impression on the reader, meaning that you don't know how to properly use a small amount of words. |
| Ygg 2005-09-14 ch 1, | I like this one a lot! It has a very spiritual connotation and reminds me of the Tao principle of Eastern mysticism. It gives the haiku a very deep feeling about the essence of life and how to live it. Just brilliant! |