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Reviews For: An Unknown Seed

The Astronaut
2006-04-22
ch 1,
Seriously, longer pieces work better for you. Your little tiny haiku things don't make any impression on the reader, meaning that you don't know how to properly use a small amount of words.
Ygg
2005-09-14
ch 1,
I like this one a lot! It has a very spiritual connotation and reminds me of the Tao principle of Eastern mysticism. It gives the haiku a very deep feeling about the essence of life and how to live it. Just brilliant!
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