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| UnsungbutWritten 2005-09-16 ch 1, | well done! i like particularly the imagery of the thousand roses exploding, and the snowy thoughts falling gently into place. but, didn't like the "million-zillion", it just seemed to throw the tone off center. in general, well done! |
| lackluster 2005-09-15 ch 1, | some really great lines just caught me. beautiful |
| perdita's kiss 2005-09-14 ch 1, | I like this a lot, but it's like super duper short! >Ring |
| account not in use 2005-09-14 ch 1, | snowy thought...what an amazing line...very good poem. |
| GypsyMothra 2005-09-14 ch 1, | Great imagery. I love "a thousand roses exploding in my chest" Great poem. |