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Reviews For: on the off chance of sunny weather

UnsungbutWritten
2005-09-16
ch 1,
well done! i like particularly the imagery of the thousand roses exploding, and the snowy thoughts falling gently into place.

but, didn't like the "million-zillion", it just seemed to throw the tone off center.

in general, well done!
lackluster
2005-09-15
ch 1,
some really great lines just caught me. beautiful
perdita's kiss
2005-09-14
ch 1,
I like this a lot, but it's like super duper short!

>Ring
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2005-09-14
ch 1,
snowy thought...what an amazing line...very good poem.
GypsyMothra
2005-09-14
ch 1,
Great imagery. I love "a thousand roses exploding in my chest" Great poem.
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