Aw...this is very sad for me...just to think of my best friend and if she was gone. This is really good because it brings out the emotion in the reader.

A little side note: "I know it wasn't you fault." You made a small typo; it should be 'your.'

Really nice. Thank you for sharing. :)

It's so sad- lovely, though.

I love this poem. I'm sorry about your friend, if this's what happened to her. I just lost a friend too. I'll pray for you.

W4J

Thx for reviewing for my story. I hope you continue to read it! Anyway, I was 'attracted' to this poem because of its title - or rather not title or...nevermind. Lol. Good job! I really enjoyed it.

This was so.. sad! It almost made me cry.

this was such a sweet poem. it made me want to cry, it was so sad... it works with your name, too.

Aw, this is sad. There's not a whole lot of metaphor or anything that readers have to really read into, but it works for you. Oh, and I like your penname.

Cheers,

~W.W.Krandomity

just leaves one so numb ... the piece is so raw and touching. makes tears well up in ones eyes.

really, you have a fine talent that matures with each and every piece you create.

~* noelle