I really like this 1

each verse was delightful. like honey at the tips of your tongue. i leave with thanks and one word: perfection.

kakyou

this was really well done i like it

Hmm.Interesting and I like the feel and flow of it. Good job, thnx for sharing.

I like it; my heart stopped beating once so I can relate. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.