|Reviews for Will: I|
| angelicprotection 11/12/05 . chapter 1
I got out of this altho i think its way off is the person's whose point of view this is from is afraid of being cast away out of her lover's grace.
| BJ Worth 11/2/05 . chapter 1
m, beautiful. I love the passion and the uncertainty
| Shippo-kun347 10/18/05 . chapter 1
Thankx 4 reviewing 4 my poem Deep Cutter. I really liked your poem. I have another poem called Thorns of A Rose. Check it out if you want to.
| REDheshy 10/15/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful. It was amazing. I am going to read the other two.
| Nobody-n-Particular 10/5/05 . chapter 1
Ecstacy mixed with the negative future, powerful.
| Starlight Maiden 9/29/05 . chapter 1
The imagery in this is absolutely wonderful...it's so emotional too...
| simpleplan13 9/20/05 . chapter 1
beautiful & very sad... I like it a lot.. one of your bests I would say
| not sure yet 9/19/05 . chapter 1
o, that was absolutely beautiful and sad, excellent imagery and very emotional, i have absolutely nothing useful to say, i really loved this though, beautifully done
| Paramour-ing 9/19/05 . chapter 1
Your work is like a painting; stained glass etched on a window that I can see into but also can see myself reflected in.
| in theory 9/17/05 . chapter 1
There is so much about this that I fell in love with. The main thing I should mention is your format; you always arrange your words with flawless, practiced precision. This time, they seemed to me to slip from the screen, they tumbled after each other in a silken slide. Gorgeous. Great work Juliet.
| AlwaysAmberella 9/16/05 . chapter 1
I...am, more speechless than ever before, stunned, amazed, transfixed. I can't get enough.
| GeorgeBailey 9/16/05 . chapter 1
Again, I haven't read enough of your work, but this is great. I love this line. "He hands my love back to me, wrapped in a torn veil". This is powerful stuff. Never stop writing. Georgebailey
| SinEe 9/15/05 . chapter 1
Extremely nice poem! It is totally awesome and great! Full of emotions..
| EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle 9/15/05 . chapter 1
My heart is like a falling star that hits as a meteor shower.
I can relate. Even to his "name".
| InuSaysLeGasp 9/15/05 . chapter 1
The repitition here was wonderfuly spaced and the perpetual comparision to the evening made me feel oh so floaty.
Favourite Line(s): "after all there was still pink in the sky when I left."