wow. it's a story. the pictures you paint wiht your words are beautiful.

"While blood kept staining the bond connecting us" that's genuis ^^ right there.

Wow. I espicially enjoy a heart-felt poem, which this one is. This is so going on my faves. I espcially like your length of the poem, bigger longer poems always have more expression. Wow, great job. But I feel that the 'please review' kinda ruins it at the bottom. It should just end at your last line of the poem. Then you could put those line things separating them, then write about reviewing! wow, great job!

this was so nice, beautiful, and true...and really, the words flowed...and my english teacher says good writing "FLOWS" so... this is GREAT! *grins* go sis!

aw =[ well like I've said, I'm going through that now. It's really well written. It's a really good poem and I love it! =] you're an awesome writer!! And a pretty good friend, eh she lost out when she let your friendship diminish... =]