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| Inguz 2005-09-14 ch 3,  | abuseWow this was great! Very striking stuff! I could really relate to the whole thing. Short but excellent writing, it works well in the direct form you have it in! I'm your first reviewer too! Don't worry they start to come in soon... I only have 4 myself! Anyway good luck with this great piece of work ~ Hope to hear from you soon, Inguz |