It did remind me a lot of the Weetzie Bat books. I like it though. You are a wonderful writer.

hey ella, it's molly.your writing is amazing, i'd love to read more of it.

and i like this story especiallybecause it reminds me of someone. i've been in your writer girl's position.if you know what i mean...

and i really like your characters.:)keep writing, keep being wonderful..

~Molly

i really like this.it is simliar to weetzie bat, but i like that element.its lovely.

I still think it's wonderful! I still love it, I still think the words thing at the beginning is brilliant, I still think it's a beautiful piece, and I wish I could think of a better review, but I used up all my good praise the first time. :P It rocks, you rock, keep writing. ^.^

of course it's not bad!! it's amazing! fantastic job, and please post something by sunday!