This is extremely pretty, and softly passionate...Is mysterious yet stripped...Bold and graceful.

Did I say thank you? I like it.

very pretty...

nice

i'm confused, though i think i get it. lol. if i do, very nice.

-jac

i loved the ending...good, strong poem.

keep writing.

damn . . . i have no criticisms. love the imagery, love the message, just beautiful.

why can't i write like that?!