|Reviews for orphan child|
| Rum Kitten 9/27/05 . chapter 1
_ all of us somewhere have that child. I act like her all the time. I'm sorry you didn't get any reviews last time. heh.
| Saeo 9/15/05 . chapter 1
Aw, it's so sweet...I dunno why, but this poem really touches readers. The rhythym really brought it out too. Tssoe last lines really brought everything together. Perfecto. . Great job, I really liekd this.
| Life loving freak 9/15/05 . chapter 1
HeyThis isnt really a humor poem, its more of an agnest poem, or a sad poem. It's good though!
| Lovejoy 9/15/05 . chapter 1
Maybe you got no reviews last time because no one read it, I thought this was an excellent poem. Not one I could relate to but one that I could still hear the emotions to. It flowed so elegantly too, good read!