_ all of us somewhere have that child. I act like her all the time. I'm sorry you didn't get any reviews last time. heh.

Aw, it's so sweet...I dunno why, but this poem really touches readers. The rhythym really brought it out too. Tssoe last lines really brought everything together. Perfecto. . Great job, I really liekd this.

Always, saeo

HeyThis isnt really a humor poem, its more of an agnest poem, or a sad poem. It's good though!

Maybe you got no reviews last time because no one read it, I thought this was an excellent poem. Not one I could relate to but one that I could still hear the emotions to. It flowed so elegantly too, good read!