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| DiamondPrincess25 2008-08-20 ch 10,  | abusedo they get together? what happens next |
| Madi 2008-08-20 ch 10, anon. | abuseDear Kellie, I'm really new to fictionpress, but my friend has been sending me stories from it all the time. I love reading them. My only problem is that I have, well, no patience. Not to sound rude... I love your story "Second Hand Soda," but you haven't updated it in a year and you stopped at chapter ten... I was wondering if you had any desire to finish it. I really hope so, and please e-mail me back to tell me if you are or aren't. I love your story though, and I think you are a very good writer. I would love it if you would finish it. Thanks, Madi |
| Destiny2RoseClan 2008-08-15 ch 9, | abusePlease review soon if possible! This was really getting good..! And Gav? I did not see that one... |
| llgg89375 2008-08-13 ch 10, | abusePLZ UPDATE SOON! IM DIEING HERE!LOL HAHAHA! |
| anonymous 2008-08-07 ch 10, anon. | abuseI just randomly came across your story, and I absolutely LOVE it. So funny and entertaining, especially reading about all the crazy stuff they do. AMAZING I can't wait to read more |
| Spurlunk 2008-08-06 ch 10, | abuseROTFL It's all Britney's FAULT! I love that. I love saying it's all THEIR fault when it's someone totally unrelated...anyway, when will you be updating this? Soon, I hope! |
| Spurlunk 2008-08-06 ch 9, | abuse"Especially since he was singing it into a wrench, using it as a mic, in his garage while fixing his car with no shirt on and oil smeared all over him. Looking very manly. Jake would’ve been a YouTube star." I love that quote! And the mesh? LOL! This is a really really cool story. You could totally be a published author. |
| Spurlunk 2008-08-06 ch 8, | abuseCarrie should get with Gavin, not Jonah. =P |
| Spurlunk 2008-08-06 ch 7, | abuseAm I the only one who doesn't like Kyle much? |
| Spurlunk 2008-08-06 ch 6, | abuseCrazy! That sounds like a really fun game, mall truth or dare. I'd love to play it, but I wouldn't have the guts. xD I like how it's cliche but I'm still reading it - you must be doing something right! |
| Spurlunk 2008-08-06 ch 5, | abuseJake, Carrie and Allie sound like fun people to know. And i HATE 'My Humps'!! |
| Spurlunk 2008-08-06 ch 4, | abuseI like Gavin! He seems really nice! He's my fave character so far! And...erm...oh right. I like all of the scenes where Allie remembers cool things she did with Jake and Carrie. =P |
| Spurlunk 2008-08-06 ch 3, | abuseCarrie and Jake are so cute together! But why is Allie always so mean to her?? =( |
| Spurlunk 2008-08-06 ch 2, | abusePoor Carrie. =( |
| SapphireEyes16 2008-08-05 ch 2, | abuseplease update soon! |