Alright, I caught up on this, sort of. I wasn't really sure what to say for chapters 3, 4, and 5... and I'm not really sure what to say about this. I think I'm waiting for it to make sense? I noticed you got back to the one with the book in chapter 5 and the charred corner comment intrigued me. I'm waiting to see where this is going...

its kinda suspended...maybe u should work on the last bit. i remember reviewing these ages ago...i'd pretty much forgotten about them. this was good, keep writing!

~mez~

This is not as good as your other chapters...you had a couple mistakes such as...instead of "meespecially" there should be a space in there, and instead of "stabler" it should be something like "more stable". Other than the grammar errors though, it was good as well! Keep writing I want to read more, its intriguing!

You're good at writing! Even though this was a "five minute quickie", it was still really good!

Good so far...time to read more!

Hmm...now the mystery starts even more...time to read more.

This chapter is good as well!

This start is good so far - I'm going to read more!

Thanks for the reviews too--I'm a guy, by the way. If my story Matthias Burnes confuses you so far, don't worry, it has a lot of work to be done.

great and getting better! weird that the guy doesnt like phones, but i guess everyone has something like that. ur chapters are pretty short, why not make them longer? otherwise, keep updating!

~mez~

great! u got suspense in this. wonder what happens next. keep updating!

~mez~

great job. very interesting. i'm also ang-dev btw which is why u havent got reviews from me for the previous few chp's. keep writing with this tho!

~mez~

This is really cool, I like how you managed to put all your ideas together into one book. And by the way, I LOVE the name Sioresu!

Rock on!

Awesome, somehow I forgot to check to see if you had updated this one, and I'm happy you did! I like the main character, and, of course, the name Sioresu. Very cool. I like the paragraph about how the books look like bridges, by the way. Anyway, it's great how you managed to bring these ideas together into a single story, otherwise they might truly become nothing but forgotten dreams. Anyway, the only problems with this chapter were typos, so NO WORRIES! Wo...

Blessed be!

Oh, a bit of mystery. I take it this is one of the stories? I should reread the first chapter; it's been a while. This was an interesting addition. I can't wait to see where it's going.

i love your style - abstract, sort of, and very creative. your words make clear images in my mind. the chapters' shortness just adds to the drama - good job! :)