Reviews for The Misery Chronicles

Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2005-09-15 ch 3,	I suppose these stories really are all about misery. This does good. Though I highly discourage you using too many adverbs. I quote from Stephen King when I ay, "The road to hell is paved in adverbs." Which is ironic becuase this is prett much what this story is about, a girl going through "hell".
Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2005-09-15 ch 2,	Very strong and angsty. But you really do need to work on your punctuations. Suggestion, just try writing, "Lakes formed in my shoes and my socks became an instant sponge." I think both socks would become socks would become sponges because both shoes became "lakes". Though I think there is a much better way to write this, but I tried to do it in your way.
Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2005-09-15 ch 1,	Hm.Interesting. This has a unique flavor into it. You could say this is a metaphor for all our lives. We enjo it while we can before it is all gone. Nice work. P.S.: Which "The Grudge" movie did you like? The one with Sarah Micheele Gellar? Because the American version sucked. I liked the original Japanese one better.