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| Need 'n' Know 2005-09-18 ch 1, | abuseI like your... um... it's called rhythm, right? Well, the... (sweatdrops) You get what I mean, how the stanzas are grouped together nicely, and it flows... yeah, I'm bad at commenting, can't you tell? Julia. |
| a 2005-09-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was okay |
| Eshana the Searcher 2005-09-15 ch 1, | abusesweet... and not like cute sweet... like cool... that's really neat... makes me think of several books and then I go off into my own world... very good...~eshana the searcher |
| MrVagabond 2005-09-15 ch 1, | abuseHey there-Great poem, awesome sense of epic-saga-ness =P Really though, great style, excellent flow, and amazing depicting work. Great imagination! Good luck with future works- Mike |
| ADSpencer 2005-09-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is frickin' awesome! You could make this an epic! I love it... |
| nightdragon0 2005-09-15 ch 1, | abuseBesides the nice rhyme, also paints an interesting picture of the dragons emerging from the flames |