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Reviews For: The Making of Dragons

Need 'n' Know
2005-09-18
ch 1,
abuseI like your... um... it's called rhythm, right? Well, the... (sweatdrops) You get what I mean, how the stanzas are grouped together nicely, and it flows... yeah, I'm bad at commenting, can't you tell?

Julia.
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2005-09-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt was okay
Eshana the Searcher
2005-09-15
ch 1,
abusesweet... and not like cute sweet... like cool... that's really neat... makes me think of several books and then I go off into my own world... very good...~eshana the searcher
MrVagabond
2005-09-15
ch 1,
abuseHey there-Great poem, awesome sense of epic-saga-ness =P Really though, great style, excellent flow, and amazing depicting work. Great imagination! Good luck with future works-

Mike
ADSpencer
2005-09-15
ch 1,
abuseThis is frickin' awesome! You could make this an epic! I love it...
nightdragon0
2005-09-15
ch 1,
abuseBesides the nice rhyme, also paints an interesting picture of the dragons emerging from the flames
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