That's a really beautiful poem and you are very lucky to have found someone who loves you yet continues to place God first in a relationship. It was very beautifully written.

It's very nice that you love that she puts God before you. This poem is awsome, unexpected from people our age, so that's pretty cool. Keep up the good work!

your are so awesome as usual. I loved the religious influence you put into this. Beautiful, i'd like to see more of these. I'm a Christian too, so I could realte. You know except with my boyfriend.

-ShazzY

nice. heartfelt. makes me want romance in my life...

Wow... great use of words!!

heartfelt~~ makes me believe in the goodness of life~

keep writing!

O! I love this! I like the sort of rhymes, especially the end. The rhythm worked so well...this is just so wonderfully done!

This is so great, I love it!

Much Love,

Lady Glass

Formerly S. A. Hereatta

that is so sweet! it's the kind of thing that makes all women go "aww" which is what I did lol. I love this! It's get a favorite most definitly! Write on!!

Nicely penned.

I like the way you recognize that she is in a process of growth for from girl to woman she becomes in the writing.