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| Mariposa2 2006-04-07 ch 1,  | abusedude, why did you abandon this story? the start is amazing! I hope you continue it somehow. seriously, it's really, really good. |
| Beautiful Rendition 2006-03-28 ch 1, | abusei really liked this. it was written nicely. good job. |
| MaHaLLz 2005-12-29 ch 1, | abusethis was pretty good. you caught my attention... i'm interested in what you have planned for the next chapters. and thanks for the review you sent me! it was much appreciated. |
| Plinky 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseWow. Incredibly gripping first chapter. Sounds like a really original story. Beautiful description of the girl. You paint a picture of warmth - it reminds me of sunshine and autumn leaves. And wholesomeness. Lovely contrast between this and the demony thing in her mind. I hope you have more of this!! XP |
| Xenodevil 2005-09-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved it, I hope to read more as you go on with it. Its kinda the mood of writing i feel like reading. I loved the very last part "t there are no true endings, and as such my own tale will have no ending, though the part to be written shall." You must keep me updated. I would love to be one of you readers. I loved it alot. You're very good at what you do. I hope to see more soon...like very soon...Its very good. Kinda Dark, which is very cool. |
| as beauty dies 2005-09-17 ch 1, | abusebefore I start just give me a moment of pure sugar induced bliss: *squee* SYSTEM OF A DOWN is awesome, yep that whole sentenced made my day. really, great writing and good music taste. must I say more? I shall any way. alright, this seems like and interesting set-up to a disturbed and ,hopefully, laced with its own dramatic loops. I just can't wait to unravel more of the mystery you start off with so brilliantly. I just love how detailed the first sentence is and then it is all more emotive, and just telling. it all is just so beautiful and adds such a unique and beautiful flare to it. your writing style is amazing, graceful and indeed elegant. I. Love. It. please, write more. ~* as beauty dies *~ |
| Megalo-Otaku 2005-09-15 ch 1, | abuseFirst paragraph is really detailed but some of the middle ones and last ones seem to repeat themselves. I'll keep reading becauseit's short, and I don't like stories as long as mine. Plus so far it seems to kick **. |