*falls in love* haven't... got... words... I love the lines about the "Bloody mural" and "becoming real All over the ceiling and walls". oh. it's chilling and... holy.

Suicidal stuff is always really interesting... all feelings that we can relate to...only poem i got that has stuff like this involves a warrior in "blackened sun"

*shrugs* keep up the good work

I like it, but perhaps you need to fix the meter? I tried reading it more like, "I stagger through school, falling into the wall/ Through mindless classes I can't recall attending" than by reading it "I stagger through school/falling into the wall/ through mindless classes" And also, would be real on the ceiling, or the floor? because if you say floor during "all over the floor and walls" and don't say walls again during "in the blood i spilled on the walls" you can kind of omit the "spilled on the walls." but i like the message, and the imagery is hazy and dreamlike. good job! i'm sorry if this sounds really weird/bad, i'm in a rush for school. bah. school.