I like the way this begins. Its kind of like a summary which doesn't tell you completely about thge story, but gives you a picture of the writing style. Good job!

Yay, joy! Update!

This is KEWL!

Ooh, yes! I LOVE IT! Please update soon! It's a fantastic story and I want to read it to the end!

I've only read the first chapter: AWESOME lead (prologue). It makes me want to read more-!