I read this story over and over again. I really like it.

This is an extremely powerful story. I like the fact that even though it's random snippets, they form to make a comprehensive story. Your style is beautiful.

Can't move my arms to type this. Story weighed me down with emotion. Nearly cried. So great.-MC

You should turn this into a short story. You have a magnificent gift.

Very powerful storytelling. I like the fact that you only show the 'highlights' of their life, skipping everything in between. It makes the story pacing super fast and adds the element of feeling like time is going to run out - which it does, by the end of the story. A very enjoyable read.