wow i like this a lot, it's very well written, and the feelings are well expressed, i always like to read pieces that have common titles, or titles that i have for my own pieces to see how other ppl inturpret the word, yours was really great i enjoyed it a lot, thank you for sharing and thanx for the review!

hm. I really like this. It's like someone's disconnected observations of the darkness. It's really cool.

Great job!

Awesome. Excellent visual description and words, the structure, just awesome.

wow, wow, wow, Very cool, I read it in a fast pace, so I hope that us how it was meant.

Well Done.

Solo.

Wonderful! Again, that emotion conveyance thing...it's great!:>