Wow. I enjoyed this greatly. Really neat take on falling asleep as the mind wanders. I especially like how it has lighter undertones, but isn't necessarily a comedic poem.

Wow. Interesting. Captivating... good, generally.

I like the little hint of wit added.

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I read this a long time ago, and apparently I forgot to review, sorry. This is very well written, evoking visuals I can only stand in awe of. Very, very well done.

Wow, this is beautiful.

I love the imagery created with so few words.

The metaphor of the train is well done.

Great work, keep it up ^_^

Whoa! I can see already that you're a very talented writer! I love the vivid imagery you use to express the "continent of your dreams". Very sweet. Welcome to fictionpress! :-) -- J.max