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| xxdirtyxxliesxx 2006-05-25 ch 1, | abuseJeebus, Lia... that was... I don't... phew... very very good!! |
| paledaisy78 2005-09-17 ch 1, | abusethts so sad. and stuff like this happens all the time too. tht poor little girl, i wanna give her a hug.this was good, can't wait for other stuff! *wink wink* |
| Without a Hat 2005-09-17 ch 1, | abuseInteresting enough. Judging from your writing fashion when in story, I think you could've managed a much more eye-catching description —— I almost passed up reading the story. I wish I had more of a comment, but not much comes to my currently side-tracked mind. |
| chris 2005-09-16 ch 1, anon. | abuse>< awws it's sad.. o.o and yet so real. *huggles* i need a huggle. |
| Love Eternally 2005-09-16 ch 1, | abusedeep very deep. awesome Lia Star |