Jeebus, Lia... that was... I don't... phew... very very good!!

thts so sad. and stuff like this happens all the time too. tht poor little girl, i wanna give her a hug.this was good, can't wait for other stuff! *wink wink*

Interesting enough. Judging from your writing fashion when in story, I think you could've managed a much more eye-catching description —— I almost passed up reading the story.

I wish I had more of a comment, but not much comes to my currently side-tracked mind.

>< awws it's sad.. o.o and yet so real. *huggles* i need a huggle.

deep very deep. awesome Lia Star