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Reviews For: Hell On Earth: A Story Of Violation

xxdirtyxxliesxx
2006-05-25
ch 1,
abuseJeebus, Lia... that was... I don't... phew... very very good!!
paledaisy78
2005-09-17
ch 1,
abusethts so sad. and stuff like this happens all the time too. tht poor little girl, i wanna give her a hug.this was good, can't wait for other stuff! *wink wink*
Without a Hat
2005-09-17
ch 1,
abuseInteresting enough. Judging from your writing fashion when in story, I think you could've managed a much more eye-catching description —— I almost passed up reading the story.

I wish I had more of a comment, but not much comes to my currently side-tracked mind.
chris
2005-09-16
ch 1, anon.
abuse>< awws it's sad.. o.o and yet so real. *huggles* i need a huggle.
Love Eternally
2005-09-16
ch 1,
abusedeep very deep. awesome Lia Star
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