This is beautiful!

Wow that was great, kind of freaky too. I love it!

Weird, but would a poem be any good if it wasn't? Very good. And good job on the title too.

you know you pick the best words to describe things. *thumbs up*

wow, deep. I like it but a can't pin point why. cool.

Hm. This one was a bit more cut up then the rest - But I liked this the best. It gave the poem kind of a longing, lost feeling. And kind of an unfished stand. The tone overall was pretty different -

Nice job.

Thanks for the review.

Your imagery was spectacular, and your words were powerful. Rock on!

this is a very beautiful piece. it portrays wonderful imagry in my opinion and the words play nicely into pictures in my mind as i read it. which, in general, is what the writers piece should do for the reader. so, very good, and kw!

davida

Very good job, you're an excellent writer.

¿How could we live so many years entrapped?

A silence leaden covering our souls,

Through which no rays of light could penetrate,

Only hard radiation with fierce strength,

Could pierce thick barriers surrounding us,

¿Was it then a surprise when I gave up?

¿When existential pressures drove me out?

That a belief that mortal life so short,

Should not embued in hatred be each day,

But find repose in gentle words and touch,

While living each detail great nature brings,

Those offerings to God so oft unseen,

For trivial they seem in their smallness,

But great they are to souls in reverie.

*sigh* DUDE... I don't know how you do it... this poem was incredible!

vewy pwetty... i could help you get rid of the double spacing if you want... i like it a lot

...beautiful...

this is REALLY a great poem. You should enter it in a contest or get it published or something. This poem just...(tries to search for word) is alluring.

wow, great vocabulary. and very good imaging. kudos!Sarah

I love every single word you used in this amazing and truly wonderful poem. It is so inspiring and I am in awe of all of it, for it is *so* good.